Monday, September 17, 2012

Ender and Alfreds epic crash




Ender-  Enders Game

Alfred- The Contender


It was a cold morning when alfred stepped out his front door not knowing what the day had planned for him. He started walking to the gym like he does every day to keep training to become a boxer even though his chances were slim at the time. Every day all Alfred could think about was boxing he could never get it of his mind,it was like his best friend. But today he did not know that he was not going to be at the gym at all today but only to find that he'd be in space. Ender woke up to the sound of his half broken alarm clock and like any other day he didn't want to get out of bed. After he got dressed he started to head to the space ships cockpit where everyone else was. Everyday spending hours just making sure that the ship is running well when he could be sleeping he hated it there and just wanted to go home. Around 5:00pm Ender felt a huge bump on the ship that sent him to the floor, after getting up he looked at his computer and before he could do anything another bump hit the ship sending him to the floor.  By the second time he was on the floor he heard a big roar,he got up again and looked out the window and saw that the left wing of the ship was on fire. He ran to his computer again and tried to cool down the wing but nothing worked,then at that exact moment he heard the captain yel to everyone saying we're going down. We’re going down Ender thought to himself,those were the exact words that crushed him. Ender ran to his room and shut the door hoping that he would live,5 minutes went by, then 10,and then 20 nothing had happened yet but right when he looked up his body lunged forward then everything went black. Alfred felt a big shake in the ground like an earthquake was happening, Alfred ran outside and saw a little flame cloud coming up from the woods. After running for a mile he got to the woods and in the big opening in the plains he saw the huge spaceship all in flames a smoke. Alfred was going to run back and tell the police but before he could he heard someone cough. As he moved towards the ship he could vaguely see an outline of a persons body in the smoke so he shouted out to the figure but heard nothing. Then the figure shouted back i need help,Alfred ran into the smoke getting closer and closer to the figure. Once he saw the body he picked it up and ran to a nearby tree and laid him down, Alfred asked him his name the man said my name is Ender.



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